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Post by KitCloudkicker5285 on Apr 1, 2010 21:29:20 GMT -5
TaleSpin: The Cloudkicker Trio's Kit and Jeffery's Tips.
Copying Others Can Be Dangerous
A group of children were gathered together at the park, Kit and Jeffery went to investigate and found that the kids were preparing to perform the Saw-in-Half trick, except that it was not a trick and they knew that the saw would cut through the kid…for real.
"Wait," Kit shouted at them, dashing forward and seizing the saw out of the would-be-magician's hand. "What were you doing?! You could've sliced him!" he told the kid magician in a higher voice than usual.
The kid magician kicked his foot against the floor of his stage, looking sad and ashamed.
"I-I just wanted to do the trick, like you two did at the magic show…" he mumbled.
"But you don't just do something like that without learning the trick to it first," Jeffery told him kindly with a hand on the kid's shoulder. "Copying people can be dangerous if you don't know what you're doing and you could end up hurting yourself or other people."
"Gosh, I'm sorry." The kid said, looking ashamed but then it turned into an eager face. "Can you show us how it's done?"
"Uh, sure…" Kit said.
He and Jeffery got out their box and Kit slid into it,
"Now, the trick is simple." Jeffery told them, he opened the lid of the box to show them that one half of the box contains Kit's whole body in it with his legs folded, his knees were up to his chest, while the other half of the box was empty except for a pair of fake legs, identical to Kit's. "When Kit gets into the box, I'll appear to be helping him in, while in reality I'm really putting the fake legs through the holes in the box. And so when I saw through the gap between the two boxes, it makes it looks like I'm sawing him in half, but in reality he's still whole and safe."
"Oh my gosh!" gasped the kid, he turned to his friend and hugged him fiercely. "I'm so sorry, buddy, I could've hurt you very bad."
"Remember, don't mimic or copy someone unless you know how to do it." Kit said as he climbed out of the box.
"Yeah, learn what to do first from someone with more experience before you start doing it yourself." Jeffery said.
"Copying people is dangerous if I don't know what I'm doing first. Now I know better!" the kid said as he walked away.
Kit and Jeffery grinned and winked at the audience.
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Post by Kit_Lee on Apr 1, 2010 21:39:49 GMT -5
TaleSpin: The Cloudkicker Trio's Kit and Jeffery's Tips.
Copying Others Can Be Dangerous
A group of children were gathered together at the park, Kit and Jeffery went to investigate and found that the kids were preparing to perform the Saw-in-Half trick, except that it was not a trick and they knew that the saw would cut through the kid…for real.
"Wait," Kit shouted at them, dashing forward and seizing the saw out of the would-be-magician's hand. "What were you doing?! You could've sliced him!" he told the kid magician in a higher voice than usual.
The kid magician kicked his foot against the floor of his stage, looking sad and ashamed.
"I-I just wanted to do the trick, like you two did at the magic show…" he mumbled.
"But you don't just do something like that without learning the trick to it first," Jeffery told him kindly with a hand on the kid's shoulder. "Copying people can be dangerous if you don't know what you're doing and you could end up hurting yourself or other people."
"Gosh, I'm sorry." The kid said, looking ashamed but then it turned into an eager face. "Can you show us how it's done?"
"Uh, sure…" Kit said.
He and Jeffery got out their box and Kit slid into it,
"Now, the trick is simple." Jeffery told them, he opened the lid of the box to show them that one half of the box contains Kit's whole body in it with his legs folded, his knees were up to his chest, while the other half of the box was empty except for a pair of fake legs, identical to Kit's. "When Kit gets into the box, I'll appear to be helping him in, while in reality I'm really putting the fake legs through the holes in the box. And so when I saw through the gap between the two boxes, it makes it looks like I'm sawing him in half, but in reality he's still whole and safe."
"Oh my gosh!" gasped the kid, he turned to his friend and hugged him fiercely. "I'm so sorry, buddy, I could've hurt you very bad."
"Remember, don't mimic or copy someone unless you know how to do it." Kit said as he climbed out of the box.
"Yeah, learn what to do first from someone with more experience before you start doing it yourself." Jeffery said.
"Copying people is dangerous if I don't know what I'm doing first. Now I know better!" the kid said as he walked away.
Kit and Jeffery grinned and winked at the audience.
Kc5 and I both grew up watcing old Psa's (Public Service Announchments) in classic cartoons. So my bro and I decied we'd make some for our TaleSpin The Cloukicker Trio stories.
In the Frist one above Kit and Jeffery are teaching a group of random Kids about copying others that it can be very dangrous.
We plan to add a Psa here and there in our series we hope you all enjoy. and some of you like use may just remember seeing these. as a Kid and we really felt it was something that was needed back again and Kit showed us a lot as Kids so why not the kids of today. and our idea was born. 
Please enjoy and as alway we hope your enjoying our TaleSpin The Cloudkicker Trio stories and series.
God Bless you all.
and Hope your well.
Sincerely,
~Kit Lee
and ~Kc5285
CMB Assistant Mod and Mod
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Post by Ryoch on Apr 29, 2010 9:47:39 GMT -5
Great story, I really like it, but there's a few things I don't get.
I notice that the story is posted by KitCloudkicker5285, but is credited to KitCloudkicker52885, did you change your user name or is there three people involved?
In chapter six this conversation takes place:
Kit already told Chris about his time as a pirate back in Chapter 2, did Chris forget already or something?
Then in chapter eight:
It could be different in the U.S., but I know where I went to school the honor roll was once a year, at the end of the year. With the time he spent at the air pirates, and on the streets before that, how could he get on the honor roll 5 times?
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Post by KitCloudkicker5285 on Apr 29, 2010 15:03:33 GMT -5
Great story, I really like it, but there's a few things I don't get. I notice that the story is posted by KitCloudkicker5285, but is credited to KitCloudkicker52885, did you change your user name or is there three people involved? In chapter six this conversation takes place: Kit already told Chris about his time as a pirate back in Chapter 2, did Chris forget already or something? Then in chapter eight: It could be different in the U.S., but I know where I went to school the honor roll was once a year, at the end of the year. With the time he spent at the air pirates, and on the streets before that, how could he get on the honor roll 5 times?
No, Chris didn't forget, he's more in denial, he just can't seem to accept--or maybe he doesn't want to accept-- that his brother was once part of a terrorist gang
And finally, give Kit some credits, man. He's highly intelligence, he had to be to survive the streets, you know. While he had little education growing up from age 6 onward, he's a fast and willing learner. And a student can earn more than one honor roll a year, I have earned 3 or 4 a year.
Hoping you're well
God bless you
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Post by Ryoch on Apr 29, 2010 15:22:28 GMT -5
Great story, I really like it, but there's a few things I don't get. I notice that the story is posted by KitCloudkicker5285, but is credited to KitCloudkicker52885, did you change your user name or is there three people involved? In chapter six this conversation takes place: Kit already told Chris about his time as a pirate back in Chapter 2, did Chris forget already or something? Then in chapter eight: It could be different in the U.S., but I know where I went to school the honor roll was once a year, at the end of the year. With the time he spent at the air pirates, and on the streets before that, how could he get on the honor roll 5 times?
No, Chris didn't forget, he's more in denial, he just can't seem to accept--or maybe he doesn't want to accept-- that his brother was once part of a terrorist gang
And finally, give Kit some credits, man. He's highly intelligence, he had to be to survive the streets, you know. While he had little education growing up from age 6 onward, he's a fast and willing learner. And a student can earn more than one honor roll a year, I have earned 3 or 4 a year.
Hoping you're well
God bless you
--KC5285I don't doubt his intelligence, it's just done differently where I went to school. At my school it was strictly a end of the school year thing. I wasn't trying to say that he wasn't smart enough, just that here he wouldn't have been in school long enough. |
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Post by Kit_Lee on Apr 29, 2010 17:21:35 GMT -5
KitCloudkicker5285 and KitCloudkicker52885 are one in the same, the reason my name was one number short on here is because, apparently CMB had a character limit on how long to make the username.
No, Chris didn't forget, he's more in denial, he just can't seem to accept--or maybe he doesn't want to accept-- that his brother was once part of a terrorist gang
And finally, give Kit some credits, man. He's highly intelligence, he had to be to survive the streets, you know. While he had little education growing up from age 6 onward, he's a fast and willing learner. And a student can earn more than one honor roll a year, I have earned 3 or 4 a year.
Hoping you're well
God bless you
--KC5285 I don't doubt his intelligence, it's just done differently where I went to school. At my school it was strictly a end of the school year thing. I wasn't trying to say that he wasn't smart enough, just that here he wouldn't have been in school long enough.
Thanks for your review we very muchly appreciate it. and well on Kit being in school we kinda picked up after the orginal show ended here so Kit has been in school for a while now Hope that explains that a Lil more.
Again we thank you for the review.
God Bless.
Hope your well
Sincerely.
~Kit Lee
CMB Assistant Mod
and Talespin The Cloudkicker Trio Co writer.
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